Sep 14, 2010

Rain drops

As we drove
It started to rain
Rain drops falling on car's window sill

A child exclaimed
They are tears
From a crying cloud for whatever it fears

Another took a different look
She claimed these are racing cars
Racing to get to the other side

It also reminded of swarms of flies
That took off just to land again
Once the wiper is done with each swipe

Not tears nor cars nor swarms of flies
If you looked closer you will see
These are mercy drops falling from God's window sill


A said...

Awesome :)

SG said...

Excellent. Just one correction. You changed the lyrics. You wrote: Rain drops falling on car's window sill.

It should be: Raindrops keep falling on my head. (Famous song by B.J. Thomas) ha ha ha.

Bikramjit said...

kids have there own interpretation for anything .. a NICE poem :)

NRIGirl said...

Thank you friends A, SG & Bikramjit!
For your precious comments.
~ NRIGirl

Y L said...

very good writing

NRIGirl said...

Thank you Amma!

A said...

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