touching poem NRI girl.. Hope to see you in my place..Someone is Special
The comparison of the rain to mother's tears speaks volumes and touches our hearts.I never knew that a great poet is hidden in you.Please keep writing very frequently
No single bird flies by to wipe the drops of tears that silently roll;such picturesque comparison. True, that no bird flies when it rains.. and this soft rain compared to tears that aren't wiped.. wow.. Almost like a mother's tears; Ignored by all and silently shed
cont.. ( some problem cut it suddenly)/Almost like a mother's tears; Ignored by all and silently shed/Hmmm.. Only mothers will know, how much of silent tears go un noticed..wanted to write something in tamil.. but it is time for work.. will come back..
THat was a fascinating piece . It's great to notice the poet in you. And I also agree in full that the comparison to mother's tears was excellent.Altogether the lines drew the picture of a day in early winter. Yes sometimes it feels that Nature is holding back!
Almost like a mother's tears; Ignored by all and silently shed - such beautiful words.
Is this a poem, praise, prayer??!!beautifully expressed…
Touching! Deep. Never knew there was a poet in you. Expecting more soon!
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