Following poem by Rachel has been selected for the State level competition.
The Circus
by Rachel Israel
Tell me a story about the circus
before I go to bed
I want to listen to something more
before I rest my head.
When I go to the circus
I see a lot of clowns
They have colors on their faces
and I rarely see them frown.
What colors are on their faces,
what colors are there?
Red is on their noses,
do they have color on their hair?
When I go to the circus
I go on elephant rides.
Sometimes I wonder what would happen
if on the back of him were slides!
Tell me more about circuses
please tell me more!
I can find these in books and things
but those are in the store.
Well that's another adventure
I'll leave that for different times
You better go to bed now
I'm thinking of more rhymes
Every dog has his day
8 months ago
6 comments:
( to Rachel)
beautiful
you are a winner
we are all proud of you
cheers
Very nice Rachel. Love it!
For a reward take Rachel to a real
circus soon
This a beautiful poem. Loved it. Keep it up Rachel :) .
Waiting to read more poems ffrom you.
Beautiful poem!!!!
Its so beautiful and takes me back to my childhood days. Thanks Rachel and all the best.
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