Sep 6, 2011

It wasn't picture perfect...

It wasn't picture perfect...

The hair is not perfect
And the form too is not
No sun in the backdrop
No flowers nor frills

Least care was given to
Pause for a smile
No effort was taken to
Adjust the frame

Kids wouldn't join
We cared for it not
T'was just the right moment
To freeze for the still

Raindrops as backdrop
Umbrella as home
Just for that moment
We stood still as one

It wasn't very picture perfect at all
But turned out a perfect picture of all!


A said...

You are right. Picture perfect :)))

Black Walnut Pearl said...

Good one!! You both were holding the umbrella in a stylish way for a picture, where I thought Raj and I were holding as if to protect us from rain;)

anilkurup said...

You like it and its perfect. Nothing artificial about it. So its ok . perfect indeed

KParthasarathi said...

It is not the background that matters
Or the apparel or coiffeur that flatters
Neither the coolth of the umbrella above
Or the smile on the faces in love
It’s the warmth of the hands wrapped around
That makes for perfect couple ever bound

kavita said...

Wow ,beautiful ! Picture Perfect - no doubts about it !

Erratic Thoughts said...

Oh those were beautiful words on a picture perfect:)
Does it matter what backdrop or hair-makeup we have when we are with the people we love?

Anonymous said...

for me it is a perfect picture...

Beautiful ...

Rachna said...

Natural pic with amazingly real feelings!

NRIGirl said...

Thank you all for stopping by and taking the time to comment. Appreciate it.

KP Sir! That was a lovely poetry you wrote. Thank you!

Anonymous said...

Indeed it is Pictue Perfect :)
touchwood .. and god bless


deeps said...

Beauty in beholder’s eye ha? and eye is window to the heart :)

Sanand said...

I agree with Mr K Parthasarathy - those arent the things that make a picture perfect...some of the unwritten factors definitely are.

Good to see such a happy pic in the rains.

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